Sleeping Valor

Mwaha. I just thought of this, since I just read the fourth chapter. Relevance! They do all this shopping, but is it really truly relevant to the plot? I mean, ...

^_^ I keep forgetting you just call your story 'my book'. I'm a little not on top of things right now, but I will be coming back and giving you ...

I'm glad you liked it. And yeah, I've been reading through the many pages I wrote of this story and there are a lot of run on sentences. =P (You ...

=P Aww man. And here I thought it was french. *goes to an all french school* This is a nice sweet poem. I especially liked the first bit. I didn't ...

I think before we ask ourselves why any one person would be attracted to a person of the same sex, we should ask ourselves why we are attracted to someone ...

Hollow Lake (Part 2) Just put it up, you could crit that too.=P

^_^ This is quite good. Since it's journal style, I have no complaints grammar wise, I didn't notice anything to correct. =P Sorry! Plot wise, it's great. It's a little ...

Hello. :D Welcome to YWS. You picked a great place to be. This is an excellent community. Hmm. Yup. My welcoming skills have gone down the drain. =P I need ...

*bows* Thanks for reading. It's been fun. ^_^ Keek out!

His name was Ivan. He was a Russian, hired assassin and he had one mission. This was about the easiest job yet, to murder a fourteen year old boy. But ...

Hola. So, as far as history background story goes, this looks good. But I'm not sure if my opinion counts since I don't read much of this type of stuff. ...

Wanda settled into the helicopter, contemplating her situation. Marge had helped her out again, somehow. Once again she contemplated how it was possible for someone who didn't exist to know ...

Because the media has convinced us that if we screw up prom our lives are over and we will never live it down. Why do people think that penguins and ...

Eight lives left

You asked if we feel we get enough exercise. That's a very different question from if we do get enough. I'm going to vote no, but I do feel I ...